The real problem isn't the vocabulary
Most advice on "explaining technical work" focuses on avoiding jargon. That's part of it. But the deeper issue is that technical explanations and managerial explanations are structured around completely different questions.
You're explaining: what you did and how you did it.
Your manager is asking: what changed, why does it matter, and what's next.
These are different questions. Translating from one to the other isn't dumbing down โ it's a legitimate skill. And it directly affects your career: the engineers who get promoted are almost always the ones who can make their work legible to people who don't code.
The translation framework
For any technical work, you need four things:
1. The situation before โ what was broken, slow, missing, or at risk
2. What you did โ one sentence, translated to outcomes (not mechanisms)
3. The situation after โ what changed for users, the team, or the product
4. What it enables โ what's now possible that wasn't before
Not every explanation needs all four. A quick standup update might just need #2 and #3. A performance review entry needs all four. A status email to a stakeholder needs #1, #3, and #4.
The vocabulary translation table
Here's how to translate the most common technical concepts into language that lands:
| Technical term / concept | How to say it instead |
|---|---|
| Race condition | A timing bug where two things happening at once produced corrupted results โ like two people editing the same document simultaneously and overwriting each other's work |
| Refactored the codebase | Reorganized the underlying code to make it easier to change โ no new features, but future work will be faster and less likely to introduce bugs |
| Added index to database query | Improved search speed in the database โ reduced page load time from 8 seconds to under 1 second for the analytics dashboard |
| Wrote unit tests | Added automated checks that verify the feature works correctly โ these run automatically on every code change so we catch regressions before they reach users |
| Technical debt | Code that works now but will slow us down later if we don't address it โ like deferred maintenance on a building |
| Memory leak | A bug where the application accumulates memory over time without releasing it โ eventually causes crashes or slowdowns, typically after the app has been running for hours |
| API integration | Connected our product to [service] โ users can now [specific capability] without leaving our app |
| Deployed to production | The change is now live for all users |
| Reviewed 12 PRs | Reviewed 12 code changes from teammates โ caught [X] issues before they went to production, helped [names] with [specific technical decisions] |
| CI/CD pipeline | Automated deployment process โ code that passes our checks gets deployed automatically, reducing manual work and the risk of human error |
The pattern: start with what it does or prevents for users/the team, optionally add a brief analogy if the concept is genuinely unfamiliar.
Before/after examples for common scenarios
Standup update after debugging
Status update after a performance fix
Explaining why something took longer than expected
The performance review version
The same translation applies to self-assessments, but you have more room. Use it to add quantification and forward-looking context:
Led design and implementation of the notification service โ the infrastructure that sends transactional emails and in-app alerts across the product. This was a greenfield project I designed end-to-end.
The system handles ~12K notifications/day and has a 99.97% delivery rate since launch. I built in retry logic and failure handling so that individual failures don't cascade. This architecture decision has since been used as a reference for two other async jobs.
Impact: replaced a manual process (the team was copying and pasting from a Google Sheet) and enabled the product team to launch the onboarding email sequence, which converted 14% better than the control in A/B testing.
When to go deeper vs. stay high-level
Read the room. Most of the time, high-level outcomes are what's needed. But there are situations where technical detail adds credibility:
- When the work was genuinely hard โ briefly noting that you tracked down a multi-service race condition communicates something about the difficulty level
- When something went wrong and you fixed it โ your manager may need to explain the incident upward; give them the one-sentence technical summary they can use
- When you're in a 1:1 with a technical manager โ they may actually want the detail; gauge their reaction
The general rule: start with the outcome, then offer the mechanism if asked or if it's material to understanding the difficulty.
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- โ Does it explain what changed for users or the team โ not just what you did?
- โ If you used a technical term, is it either commonly known or briefly explained?
- โ Does it say why this mattered? (If it's not obvious, add one sentence.)
- โ If something took longer than expected, have you explained the real reason in terms your manager can relay upward?
- โ Is the next step clear? ("Deploying today" / "blocked on X" / "moving to Y next")
The thing that actually unlocks this
The engineers who are consistently good at this aren't translating in their head every time they write an update. They've built the habit of noting outcomes as they work โ writing down "fixed the login bug โ users won't see random logouts" in their notes immediately, rather than trying to reconstruct it at standup or performance review time.
The gap between technical work and the language of impact is real. But it's bridgeable. The raw material is your work. The translation is learnable. And the people who learn it don't just communicate better โ they get recognized for the work they're already doing.
See also: Standup Generator ยท Performance Review Generator ยท Standup when you had a bad week ยท Live demo